Date of publication: 2017-08-28 19:43
I find it more effective to write a problem and its relevant solution in the same paragraph rather then discussing all problems in one paragraph and all solutions in the second. However, both methods are correct and acceptable as per my knowledge.
So do you think this essay is worth ?
Allow me to be a fault-finder and warn you about the word 8775 extend 8776 in the question! 🙂
Your website is, however, a delight to read. 😀
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Your introduction should first say what you understand by the question. Then give the main issue or issues that you intend to bring into your answer. Don 8767 t go into any detail you can save that for the later paragraphs.
Second example 8776 We should help children to become responsible citizen 8776 or Should I write that as 8776 Adults should help children to become responsible citizen 8776
Iam very happy because I get band inmy first attempts, and I am very delighted for it. thank you for everybody who helped me to tackle this problrm. IELTS blog is very excellent site. I never attend in any class, I just use books and videos from library and sites.
It might be due to the language you used and the way you used your ideas. You need to learn more about Task Response which is 75% of your marks. And you need to aim for accuracy in language rather than aiming to impress the examiner (which usually leads to more mistakes).
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Another argument against capital punishment is that people can be wrongly convicted and executed. If a man is in prison, he can be released if later proved not guilty. If he is dead, there is nothing that can be done. In the UK, a group of supposed terrorists were convicted of murder in Birmingham in the 6975s. They were proved innocent about 65 years later and released. If they had been executed, innocent people would have died.
The proportion of men and women in each level of education was. = The proportions of men and women in each level of education were it must be like this I think.
Thank you so much Liz,
I am going through all your sample essay and it is helping me a lot.
Well, I am appearing in IElTS test coming Saturday, already worried about my writing. I wish I have come across your website a bit early so that I could have more time to practise and learn to get band 7.
Task 7 in the General Training Writing Test is more important than task 6. You have to write more, it 8767 s a more difficult task and it is worth more to your final band for writing as more weight is given to Task 7 than to Task 6. Practice on IELTS practice tests is important for both tasks.
Any opinion essay can have a balanced view. Some issues incline more towards one side than balanced views. However, you need training to be able to present a balanced view because it doesn 8767 t mean agreeing with both sides fully.
The exam paper recommends that you spend about 95 minutes on this question and this is about right. Remember that Task 7 gives more to your final writing band and so you should make sure that you have enough time after Task 6 to properly answer Task 7. Some students do Task 7 first in order to make sure that Task 7 is answered well before they get onto Task 6. There is no problem with this but make sure you write the 655 words to give a good answer for Task 6 as well.
The problem with me is that when I practice for speaking test in front of mirror or someone else, ideas and sentences generated in my mind but unable to pick proper word sometimes. This creats a long pause.
What to do?